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Re: FRST THREE PAGES OF MY BOOK CH. 1
Heres what i will let you see so far if all goes well and i can trust, more will be up........ Tyr is pronouced (tear) like 'let me tear something' ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: The Shadowing Enders
Whoops!!!!! sorry about that!!!! I changed it and thanks for the comment. Also the capitalization is NOT wrong they are THE ENDERS the peom talks about, they are supposed to ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Worlds Apart 2
Quote: [A cool breeze blew through the half-open window causing the brittle branches of the willow growing outside to tap rythmically and the delicate golden curtains to leap away. The ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Spirited 0.1
Quote: [he first lines of the poem are written in blood.] this is great! this provides a wonderful hook which really gets the readers exited about your story, I found ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Dragons' Legend
Quote: [“Dragons, fantasy or reality? That’s the question cryptozoologists have been trying to prove, but only met dead ends by reality. Can there be a creature who is not an ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Light & Dark
[Light & Dark In the life, exist two ways: Light and Dark. Both Light and Dark, kind’s ways that can to have several reasons for acquire. Much light like Dark ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: The Shadowing Enders
hope you like it and tell me what you think. comments are appreciated. also this was a one shot rough draft i wrote it 30 seconds before i posted it. ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Fallowdell (fragment)
[Fallowdell looked into the mirror and saw a man. Silver-limned, long-faced, wide grey eyes glazed, watching - it wasn’t him. But it never had been. Quietly, he pulled crumpled-crepe draping ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Spirited #1
[The sun had barely risen. Clad in nothing but boxers, Ajax stood up and wandered through the flat, avoiding the obstacles: the abandoned bottles, the forever damp stains, and the ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Rain
[The rain seemed to come down as if to poke fun at the people who loved the sunlight. It came down from dawn to dusk without stopping. Craig had always ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Suicide
[I knew why only several people had come to my dad's funeral. It had happened at my mom's, aunt's, and uncle's before. Everyone looked at Nathan and me like we ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter Fanfic
[It was five minutes before Harry could muster the energy to stand up and start to pack everything. As he worked, the mess on the floor lessened slowly, but the ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter Fanfic
[The reflection staring back at him was tall and skinny, and was topped by black, unruly hair that stuck out at all angles, made worse by a nights tossing and ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Hourglass No.1
this was good but this part deosn't really make any sense: [His lips pulled themselves together in a smirk as he rattled off the place names one after the other, ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Emergence (Updated 6/29/07)
good story but some bad transitiond like in this paragraph: [“Stupidest thing ever…” I found myself muttering, probably in reference to what I was doing. Quite suddenly, I found myself ...
Mar 21, 2007
